I honestly think that we should put more moneyz into science and schools. Right now we are already on the top of the military technology in the world next to china. Since we have this big leap in technology we can wait on that and go more into science tech, as in machinery and everyday tech which by tha way can also help with the war.
An example i can use would be MRE food or foo ready to eat, if we can help make this food better our soldiers can feel much better because to digest these, you would need to eat laksitives. which is bad makes you irritated and constapated for about 2 days.
I thought of a plan that can help our economy. So, currently the US uses 44% of the money in military. If we take 20 percent and split it evenly to a few other categories we could make our economy better or even stop the recession.
Here it goes: Step 1-take 5% of the moneyz from military and put it into schools, right now there has been alot of budget cuts and colleges have been raising the prices dramatically ( example -Berkeley raised its price by about 10% which is alot.)
Step 2-take another 7% and put it into science, which will help in global warming and other things, like better game system, better everyday use items, a tool that does everything like a sonic screwdriver. Robots are another growing interest in the science world, maybe we can have worker drones who if you can program them right can become a soldier( unstoppable lolz)
step 3- take 1 percent into better public transportation, which can make life better and hopefully slow the effects of global warming.
step 4- we should use the remaining 6% of the 20% in the money we use to buy moneyz. If we successfully complete this step our recession would be depleted or at the least everyone would still be able to keep a job. Also there would be more moneyz to spread around the pie chart.
Optional step- Obama wants alot of money for the military i just want to say that if you save up 30 billion dollars you can stop extreme poverty all around the world lolz
Friday, January 29, 2010
Sunday, January 17, 2010
Final Exam Paper
Note: without the questions this blog is about 1172 words long
Question #1- Explain one or two ways your writing has improved over the semester. Include a few examples from your posts over time, with analysis, to illistrate how the improvements happened.
-My ability to write blogs have improved academically (meaning my academic vocabulary and sentence structure has improved.) and has helped me focus more on one topic rather than doing a topic about cancer then writing about barnie. My blogs in the beginning were about 2 paragraphs long but now they are on a average 3-4. My first blog-(http://chubbychasers-superjelly.blogspot.com/2009/09/stuff.html) and here is one of my more current blog (http://chubbychasers-superjelly.blogspot.com/2009/10/me-me-me-me-me-me-me.html) As you can clearly see they are very different almost as if two different people wrote them. My first blog has a good topic but doesn't really focus on it.
-The first link is a blog from the beginning of the year about what i was going to write about, its only 3 short paragraphs but when you look at it at first you might think what kind of unintelligent person wrote this garbage but when you look at my newer one it is a bout 4 paragraphs and the paragraphs are very long.
Lets compare them: (2 different paragraphs from 2 different blogs)
my first blog this is my longest paragraph-The topics i have chosen to put on my blog are cars,movies, games and food. I want to write about cars because I love them. Without cars there wouldn't be any girls. For example, an expensive car will give you a nice girl those cars would be ferraris lamborghinis and Mclarens. A not expensive normal looking car (nissan, honda, toyota) will only get you normal girls and drunk hookers.
my more recent blog this is my shortest paragraph-Street soccer is not common because people think its a ghetto sport, but when you look online, these people that play can beat the best world cup players. Their foot work is extremely amazing, if you want to see these clips just search up street soccer on youtube or any other video providing sites.
the two paragraphs are very similar in length but when you look at it my way, the second one is the shortest and yet it is the same as my paragraph's longest. Not only that but my focus on them are different. My first blog post talks about what i am going to blog about then my focus went to expensive and inexpensive cars. My second paragraph stayed on focus about street soccer and where you can find more information about it.
Question #4-How do things you read influence what you write about or how you write it?
I usually read National Geographic magazine, or books by my favorite sci-fi author, Isaac Asimov. The National Geographic magazines influence what I write about because they usually offer a good source of interesting information. During Quick writes when we didn't have to write about a certain topic and that we could write whatever we wanted i would write about things from the magazine like robotics and cyborg people. Isaac Asimov is my influence on how I want to write things. He writes his stories pretty dark like from the book I-robot, When we were writing about the girl and the box i started wrting the beginning kind of dark.
This was the beginning of my quickwrite- She touched the box in her pocket then smiled sinisterly as she entered the elevator door. She kept her hands in her pocket for as long as she had the box. She tried not to get attention for the box had valuable items in worth more than 1500 mens' deaths.
That is only part of the beginning. As you could see its kind of dark and sinister. Its like the beginning of one of Isaac's books. In I-robot he starts it off with the robot murdering its own creator after the creator taught the robot so much.
When I read books, it seems i tend to blog about them when given the chance. This blog is about one of the books i read http://chubbychasers-superjelly.blogspot.com/2009/12/lost-symbol.html its about a book called Lost Symbol by Dan Brown. This is one of the ways my reading has influenced what i write about.
I also like to read comics because the story lines are more fascinating because they are expressed with pictures. The pictures help me to develop ideas for example the little bit from my mysterious box quickwrite, i got that idea from one of my comics. (i can't remember which one though.) Comics like the batman, ghost rider, and spawn are my favorites, they have a lot of dark feeling in them in which i favor. Batman is about a crazy person in the arkham asylum, Ghost rider and Spawn are both warriors from Hell battling with Heaven. If i could imply this kind of dark aura into my writing this would probably freak you out but hey... i like it.
Question #8-How do you like having a blog? How has blogging changed the way you write, the way you think, or the way you think about writing?
Having a blog has definitely changed how i write. It made me write more frequently and has changed my way thinking about it. When i first came into the class i didn't like writing about topics because they are always boring, that's one of the reasons i write off topic, but now that we have blogs and we could write about anything, it makes me a happier writer. If i didn't have a blog my writing wouldn't be as smooth because there would be a lot of writers block. I treat blogs as if they were quick writes, for example i would see how fast i can write 300 words, and how long will it take me to write 400 words etc. My time for 300 words varies between about 4-7 minutes depending on the subject.
I love having a blog around even though i don't really expect anyone to read them its just fun to look at when I'm bored. ( not that my blogs are so boring i have to be dying to read them.) When i look at my blogs i can't really choose my favorite or my least favorite(actually i can choose my least favorite) Its like dealing with children, they all have their characteristics and differences that make them unique. ( got that from a movie) My blogs are all unique because some are more interesting than others and some are more academically advanced than others, some may even have both those traits but that's one of the way blogs have changed my way of looking at writing.
Blogging, to me is definitely a better way of writing than normal essays because it changes depending on your mood and you don't need alot of steps to it. A normal essay would take about 1-2 hours to complete due to editing and brainstorming and planning out the format. But blogs is just doing it in one clean run. Not only can you write about anything you can also use your creativity to change how other people look at things. A normal essay is about a certain topic in which everyone is going to write about so all the essays would be the same. A blog however has more variety and you probably learn more looking at blogs than essays.
Question #1- Explain one or two ways your writing has improved over the semester. Include a few examples from your posts over time, with analysis, to illistrate how the improvements happened.
-My ability to write blogs have improved academically (meaning my academic vocabulary and sentence structure has improved.) and has helped me focus more on one topic rather than doing a topic about cancer then writing about barnie. My blogs in the beginning were about 2 paragraphs long but now they are on a average 3-4. My first blog-(http://chubbychasers-superjelly.blogspot.com/2009/09/stuff.html) and here is one of my more current blog (http://chubbychasers-superjelly.blogspot.com/2009/10/me-me-me-me-me-me-me.html) As you can clearly see they are very different almost as if two different people wrote them. My first blog has a good topic but doesn't really focus on it.
-The first link is a blog from the beginning of the year about what i was going to write about, its only 3 short paragraphs but when you look at it at first you might think what kind of unintelligent person wrote this garbage but when you look at my newer one it is a bout 4 paragraphs and the paragraphs are very long.
Lets compare them: (2 different paragraphs from 2 different blogs)
my first blog this is my longest paragraph-The topics i have chosen to put on my blog are cars,movies, games and food. I want to write about cars because I love them. Without cars there wouldn't be any girls. For example, an expensive car will give you a nice girl those cars would be ferraris lamborghinis and Mclarens. A not expensive normal looking car (nissan, honda, toyota) will only get you normal girls and drunk hookers.
my more recent blog this is my shortest paragraph-Street soccer is not common because people think its a ghetto sport, but when you look online, these people that play can beat the best world cup players. Their foot work is extremely amazing, if you want to see these clips just search up street soccer on youtube or any other video providing sites.
the two paragraphs are very similar in length but when you look at it my way, the second one is the shortest and yet it is the same as my paragraph's longest. Not only that but my focus on them are different. My first blog post talks about what i am going to blog about then my focus went to expensive and inexpensive cars. My second paragraph stayed on focus about street soccer and where you can find more information about it.
Question #4-How do things you read influence what you write about or how you write it?
I usually read National Geographic magazine, or books by my favorite sci-fi author, Isaac Asimov. The National Geographic magazines influence what I write about because they usually offer a good source of interesting information. During Quick writes when we didn't have to write about a certain topic and that we could write whatever we wanted i would write about things from the magazine like robotics and cyborg people. Isaac Asimov is my influence on how I want to write things. He writes his stories pretty dark like from the book I-robot, When we were writing about the girl and the box i started wrting the beginning kind of dark.
This was the beginning of my quickwrite- She touched the box in her pocket then smiled sinisterly as she entered the elevator door. She kept her hands in her pocket for as long as she had the box. She tried not to get attention for the box had valuable items in worth more than 1500 mens' deaths.
That is only part of the beginning. As you could see its kind of dark and sinister. Its like the beginning of one of Isaac's books. In I-robot he starts it off with the robot murdering its own creator after the creator taught the robot so much.
When I read books, it seems i tend to blog about them when given the chance. This blog is about one of the books i read http://chubbychasers-superjelly.blogspot.com/2009/12/lost-symbol.html its about a book called Lost Symbol by Dan Brown. This is one of the ways my reading has influenced what i write about.
I also like to read comics because the story lines are more fascinating because they are expressed with pictures. The pictures help me to develop ideas for example the little bit from my mysterious box quickwrite, i got that idea from one of my comics. (i can't remember which one though.) Comics like the batman, ghost rider, and spawn are my favorites, they have a lot of dark feeling in them in which i favor. Batman is about a crazy person in the arkham asylum, Ghost rider and Spawn are both warriors from Hell battling with Heaven. If i could imply this kind of dark aura into my writing this would probably freak you out but hey... i like it.
Question #8-How do you like having a blog? How has blogging changed the way you write, the way you think, or the way you think about writing?
Having a blog has definitely changed how i write. It made me write more frequently and has changed my way thinking about it. When i first came into the class i didn't like writing about topics because they are always boring, that's one of the reasons i write off topic, but now that we have blogs and we could write about anything, it makes me a happier writer. If i didn't have a blog my writing wouldn't be as smooth because there would be a lot of writers block. I treat blogs as if they were quick writes, for example i would see how fast i can write 300 words, and how long will it take me to write 400 words etc. My time for 300 words varies between about 4-7 minutes depending on the subject.
I love having a blog around even though i don't really expect anyone to read them its just fun to look at when I'm bored. ( not that my blogs are so boring i have to be dying to read them.) When i look at my blogs i can't really choose my favorite or my least favorite(actually i can choose my least favorite) Its like dealing with children, they all have their characteristics and differences that make them unique. ( got that from a movie) My blogs are all unique because some are more interesting than others and some are more academically advanced than others, some may even have both those traits but that's one of the way blogs have changed my way of looking at writing.
Blogging, to me is definitely a better way of writing than normal essays because it changes depending on your mood and you don't need alot of steps to it. A normal essay would take about 1-2 hours to complete due to editing and brainstorming and planning out the format. But blogs is just doing it in one clean run. Not only can you write about anything you can also use your creativity to change how other people look at things. A normal essay is about a certain topic in which everyone is going to write about so all the essays would be the same. A blog however has more variety and you probably learn more looking at blogs than essays.
Wednesday, January 13, 2010
Blog
I think that i am helpful in many ways. I can provide helpful ideas, I can help with developing new perspectives like for example- Why does that person sell things for cheap? I would put myself into that person's shoes and provide his perspective. I would say that person wants more customers than a profit because in these days of Recession, more customers in the long run equals more cash.
I dont like working with people with the same ideas as me because then there is nothing to discuss. For example- I would say something related to a certain topic and since we all have the same thinking ...it wouldn't work out. When there are different ideas there is more to discuss and the group would be more lively since there would be more disputes like "i want to block format... no i want to do some other format etc."
I'm also good at expressing my ideas with examples (most of my examples are from past experiences and some are from shows and books and other stuff.)...(just say they are reliable sources.) So...All in all i want to be in a group of different ideas.
I dont like working with people with the same ideas as me because then there is nothing to discuss. For example- I would say something related to a certain topic and since we all have the same thinking ...it wouldn't work out. When there are different ideas there is more to discuss and the group would be more lively since there would be more disputes like "i want to block format... no i want to do some other format etc."
I'm also good at expressing my ideas with examples (most of my examples are from past experiences and some are from shows and books and other stuff.)...(just say they are reliable sources.) So...All in all i want to be in a group of different ideas.
Friday, January 8, 2010
funny youtube videos
A funny youtube video i stumbled upon was the Grapist It is a commercial about grape juice. It starts off as a man in a grape costume blowing up a wall and scaring little children by sayin "I'm gonna grape you in the mouth!!!!" The kids yell "who the hell are you" and "MOMMY!" Then the grapists yells I'm gonna tie you to a radiator and grape you, then i will go to the attic and grape your mother and your father, then take your family into the basement and grape you all for decades and decades and DECADES TO COME!!!"( he emphasizes his last decade.) The people who are buying commercial were all fine with it but the boss said it was wrong and that it sounded like the man was going to rape the children.
Another funny video is the Assumption Song... You really don't want to know what this is about. Lets get onto the next video- Pooh hails Satan- The title says it all but instead of wanting honey Pooh wanted yaks blood. lol
Another video is "OREO" by the youtube uploader Balloon Shop, the first guy ate a oreo as if it were subway and put a bunch of ingredients on it like: Hershey chocolate syrup, Hershey caramel syrup, Fish Oil, Creamed Cheese, Kay an peppers, and more... The 2nd guy made a 20 stuff ( it is basically 20 oreos in which the stuffings were taken out and put into one big oreo) It is hilarious.
All of this is of course on Youtube and since i am too lazy to put the links on this i will just tell you now...
GO FIND IT YOUR SELF YOU LAZY BUM :)
HAVE A GOOD DAY
Other videos such as the random song and
Another funny video is the Assumption Song... You really don't want to know what this is about. Lets get onto the next video- Pooh hails Satan- The title says it all but instead of wanting honey Pooh wanted yaks blood. lol
Another video is "OREO" by the youtube uploader Balloon Shop, the first guy ate a oreo as if it were subway and put a bunch of ingredients on it like: Hershey chocolate syrup, Hershey caramel syrup, Fish Oil, Creamed Cheese, Kay an peppers, and more... The 2nd guy made a 20 stuff ( it is basically 20 oreos in which the stuffings were taken out and put into one big oreo) It is hilarious.
All of this is of course on Youtube and since i am too lazy to put the links on this i will just tell you now...
GO FIND IT YOUR SELF YOU LAZY BUM :)
HAVE A GOOD DAY
Other videos such as the random song and
Friday, January 1, 2010
My winter break
Well this blog is my make up one-
This Christmas i got a new wallet:) and I Like it very much. It is black with a cool red design. I also got a new couch for my room. (It can be used as a bed as well). I have been playing alot of video games in which later got banned from x-box live for 3 days because i was cussing on this one server for Halo which was kinda gay.
I didn't go anywhere but i went to my dad's workplace over in Google Headquarters in SF it had alot of free food and they give you bikes to ride around places. When i went there, There was a free bar next my dad's place in which there were beer wine tequila and more. I just got Odwalla and soda.
The lunch there was an all day buffet with free sushi, Indonesian food and burgers. For dinner there was cake, speaking of which there was really good almond tarte cake.
I watched the movie Sherlock holmes and Avatar which were both really good movies.
Sherlock Holmes was my favorite of the two movies it actually made sense. and Robert Downy Jr. was a good actor for the role as Holmes. It was funny yet exciting and thrilling. I would recommend the movie to everyone.
I am extremely tired from the vacation and i have been sleeping at around 4 AM every night and waking up at around 9 lol only 5 hours of sleep...
On the first week of the break i went to 4 malls and i got alot of stuff. I got a shirt saying "Practice safe sex...Go f**k yourself" lol
Well that basically sums up my vacation so far.
This Christmas i got a new wallet:) and I Like it very much. It is black with a cool red design. I also got a new couch for my room. (It can be used as a bed as well). I have been playing alot of video games in which later got banned from x-box live for 3 days because i was cussing on this one server for Halo which was kinda gay.
I didn't go anywhere but i went to my dad's workplace over in Google Headquarters in SF it had alot of free food and they give you bikes to ride around places. When i went there, There was a free bar next my dad's place in which there were beer wine tequila and more. I just got Odwalla and soda.
The lunch there was an all day buffet with free sushi, Indonesian food and burgers. For dinner there was cake, speaking of which there was really good almond tarte cake.
I watched the movie Sherlock holmes and Avatar which were both really good movies.
Sherlock Holmes was my favorite of the two movies it actually made sense. and Robert Downy Jr. was a good actor for the role as Holmes. It was funny yet exciting and thrilling. I would recommend the movie to everyone.
I am extremely tired from the vacation and i have been sleeping at around 4 AM every night and waking up at around 9 lol only 5 hours of sleep...
On the first week of the break i went to 4 malls and i got alot of stuff. I got a shirt saying "Practice safe sex...Go f**k yourself" lol
Well that basically sums up my vacation so far.
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